Morena AJ, Thank you for sharing your the presentation you have created on leaving a positive and helpful comment. I like how you remind everyone that you should always have a positive attitude online and I think you are so right, comments really do encourage people. I also like your thinking on slide 4 - when your work is quality, it can inspire others. How to do ensure your blogposts are quality in your class? Do you use the quality blogging rubrics? Have a great day. Tania
Thank- you so much Tania for the wonderful comment you have given me. This comment has inspired and encouraged me to do more quality work. Thanks Again!
Kia ora AJ, Great to see your examples of specific comments. I really like the way you have used 'what, how, why' and examples. I wonder if you are considering another post on thoughtful blog comments?
Morena AJ, Thank you for sharing your the presentation you have created on leaving a positive and helpful comment. I like how you remind everyone that you should always have a positive attitude online and I think you are so right, comments really do encourage people. I also like your thinking on slide 4 - when your work is quality, it can inspire others. How to do ensure your blogposts are quality in your class? Do you use the quality blogging rubrics? Have a great day. Tania
Thanks Tania for your awesome comment. I ensure my posts are quality by always double checking it and making sure that I have stuck to the topic. I do use the blogging rubrics because it helps me a little more in improving. Thanks anyway
Hi my name is Sadiyah i am a student in owairaka primary.
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Hi my name is Jacob and I am a student at Owairaka School I like how you did a slide show about commenting it was helpful and good for learning. Blog you later
Hi there my name is Sadiyah and I am a student in room 19 at Owairaka Primary school. I really like your presentation about blog commenting. From Sadiyah Odssadiyaha.blogspot.co.nz
Ni Hao AJ, Thank you for sharing this presentation, This is going to help me next time when I write a comment. I like that you did a introduction to tell the audience what the presentation is about. I like that you defined what is a positive comment. Does every comment have to have questions? Next time you could reference photos and where you got the information from. Keep up the great work! You can visit my blog at http://ctkmikaylag.blogspot.co.nz/ Kind Regards, Mikayla
My name is Vegas I am a year 5 student at Owairaka Primary. I love the pictures that you used especially the cartoon one. You’re right, success is the key. How long did it take you to think of all of the ideas? Maybe next make sure that the arrow doesn’t touch the words, because it covers them a little bit. It would be great if you could check out my blog http://odsvegash.blogspot.co.nz and leave me a comment.
Thanks Vegas for your fantastic comment. It took me about 10 mins to think of all the ideas because I have a good experience in commenting and I already know the basic stuff in leaving a comment. I will hopefully check out your blog and leave a comment.
Ciao AJ, My name is Ridha from Owairaka district school. Thanks for sharing that slide presentation. I really like your slide and how the pictures matched the text. I also liked how your text was really specific. This reminds me to always remember those rules about commenting. Do you think you could have added a video about it or mage the slide a bit more colourful? If you would like to see my blog go to: http://odsridhap.blogspot.co.nz/ Thanks, Ridha
Thanks Ridha for your nice comment. A video is a great suggestion and I might use one in my next project. I don't think making my presentation colourful is a big deal because its not really about the colour, it's about the quality
My name is Fiona, I am a student at Owairaka District School.
I really like how your slideshow shows really positive blog commenting instructions, It showed how to do a great comment! I especially like the second slide because it told me that if you don’t do a good comment the first time, you can always do it better next time. Did you make these slides as part of your school learning or just on your own?
My name is Vaughn, I am a student in room 21 from Owairaka district school. Cool presentation! I also like the pictures you added in you slide because it adds more detail. Especially the one at the end. Here is the link to my blog (http://odsvaughnm.blogspot.co.nz/). From Vaughn
I liked your slideshow about blog comments it was helpful and taught me lots about how to post a good comment. One thing you could change to make it better is slow your slideshow down so you can read it without having to pause at each slide. You could change some of your vocabulary for some more interesting words
Thanks Peace for your awesome comment. To me, speed doesn't really matter and if it goes fast that's why there is a pause button. Also, great suggestion of changing some of my vocabulary
I like your Positive,thoughtful and helpful animation. It was very interesting I have been learning how to write a quality blog comment with mark. From Pela St bernadette’s School
Hi there, my name is Ephraim and I am a student in Room 11 at South Hornby School. I really like your slideshow. It made me want to make a slideshow too. Have you thought about creating a slideshow about some other topics? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://middlesyndicatelearningcommunity.blogspot.co.nz/
Talofa AJ, I loved how you are telling people your blog commenting. I aslo loved how you explained to the bloggers how to leave a positive comment on someone else's blog. Keep up the good work!
Kia ora AJ, I liked it how you explained all ways to leave a quality comment and used really specific ways to do it because it will be pretty hard trying to do something and not knowing how your supposed to do it so thank you for you help. If so can you check my blog out if so thanks a lot. http://tsmanaiah.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia ora, My name is Kosha I come from Owairaka District Primary School. I really like how you explained how to write a really positive comment. Maybe you should make more ideas for 1 slide. I also like leaving positive comments. Instead of that keep up the fabulous work .
Blog you later!
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hey aj i was just watching the new it movie but i got all crazy so i got to stop so i said fine ill stop clowning around :> get it clown in around and im watching a clown movie :]
Jumbo AJ, My name is Chimay from Waikowhai Primary school and I am a year 5. I liked the way you used the 5 ws and look forward to seeing more of you blogs. Mabe next tome you could add less words but apart from that great job and if you would like to cheak out my blog got to https://wpschimayj.blogspot.com/
hi AJ my name is Christina i,m from Wesley intermediate and that so great that you have made a side about how to leave a positive and helpful comment maybe next time you can add thoughtful comment because you connecting to other by relating to there topic . great job AJ keep it up
Tolofa Aj my name is Tana i am a year 6 at owairaka school i really like how you talk about inspiring people with your work and words i hope to meet you in real life Blog ya later Tana from owairaka school
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ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your the presentation you have created on leaving a positive and helpful comment. I like how you remind everyone that you should always have a positive attitude online and I think you are so right, comments really do encourage people. I also like your thinking on slide 4 - when your work is quality, it can inspire others. How to do ensure your blogposts are quality in your class? Do you use the quality blogging rubrics? Have a great day.
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DeleteThank- you so much Tania for the wonderful comment you have given me. This comment has inspired and encouraged me to do more quality work. Thanks Again!
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Thank-you Maria for your wonderful comment. I will hopefully post something similiar to this topic but I am still looking into it. Thanks anyway
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Thanks Tania for your awesome comment. I ensure my posts are quality by always double checking it and making sure that I have stuck to the topic. I do use the blogging rubrics because it helps me a little more in improving. Thanks anyway
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Hi my name is Sadiyah i am a student in owairaka primary.
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ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this presentation, This is going to help me next time when I write a comment. I like that you did a introduction to tell the audience what the presentation is about. I like that you defined what is a positive comment. Does every comment have to have questions? Next time you could reference photos and where you got the information from. Keep up the great work! You can visit my blog at http://ctkmikaylag.blogspot.co.nz/
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Vegas I am a year 5 student at Owairaka Primary. I love the pictures that you used especially the cartoon one. You’re right, success is the key. How long did it take you to think of all of the ideas? Maybe next make sure that the arrow doesn’t touch the words, because it covers them a little bit. It would be great if you could check out my blog http://odsvegash.blogspot.co.nz and leave me a comment.
Internet you later...
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Thanks Vegas for your fantastic comment. It took me about 10 mins to think of all the ideas because I have a good experience in commenting and I already know the basic stuff in leaving a comment. I will hopefully check out your blog and leave a comment.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Ridha from Owairaka district school.
Thanks for sharing that slide presentation.
I really like your slide and how the pictures matched the text. I also liked how your text was really specific. This reminds me to always remember those rules about commenting.
Do you think you could have added a video about it or mage the slide a bit more colourful?
If you would like to see my blog go to: http://odsridhap.blogspot.co.nz/
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Thanks Ridha for your nice comment. A video is a great suggestion and I might use one in my next project. I don't think making my presentation colourful is a big deal because its not really about the colour, it's about the quality
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Fiona, I am a student at Owairaka District School.
I really like how your slideshow shows really positive blog commenting instructions, It showed how to do a great comment! I especially like the second slide because it told me that if you don’t do a good comment the first time, you can always do it better next time. Did you make these slides as part of your school learning or just on your own?
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Thanks Fiona for your fantastic comment. I made this slide on my own but most of my ideas is from my school learning.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Vaughn, I am a student in room 21 from Owairaka district school.
Cool presentation! I also like the pictures you added in you slide because it adds more detail. Especially the one at the end. Here is the link to my blog (http://odsvaughnm.blogspot.co.nz/). From Vaughn
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ReplyDeleteI liked your slideshow about blog comments it was helpful and taught me lots about how to post a good comment. One thing you could change to make it better is slow your slideshow down so you can read it without having to pause at each slide. You could change some of your vocabulary for some more interesting words
Thanks Peace for your awesome comment. To me, speed doesn't really matter and if it goes fast that's why there is a pause button. Also, great suggestion of changing some of my vocabulary
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DeleteKia ora, My name is Kosha I come from Owairaka District Primary School.
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