Moment in time: Warriors
As I walked into the hall, I see one woman standing in the middle of the room saying hi to everyone. As soon as I saw her shirt and the sign saying Warriors and harvey Norman, I knew what this meant and everyone else knew to. It was the Warriors!!!!!!!. I was so excited and other people were too. When the players walked in, everybody was cheering, clapping and screaming their heads off - just like I did.
I was excited because I got to meet famous people, but not only famous people, the WARRIORS!!!. It was so cool because we got to talk to them, give them hugs and sit next to them. I had never meet any of the players before and so this was a dream come true.
We played lots of games and I learnt a lot. I learnt about the players and their off field lives. The cool part was when we took a group photo and I got to stand next to Jeff (one of the players).
Today was so fun and it was the best day of my life and I will never forget this special moment. I also give a big thanks to Kidscan who made this all happen and it was a pleasure meeting all of them.
By: AJ
I used Google microphone for this writing.
Great work Aj - love that you used Google microphone to write this
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ReplyDeleteThanks Mrs. For your wonderful comment.
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ReplyDeleteYou did a good job but next time use present tense and fix those capital letters!
Good Try though,
Tino
Thanks Tino for the comment, I really appreciate it!!!
DeleteI love your writing and I like that you used google microphone. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mikayla, I really appreciate that you are commenting on my blog.
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ReplyDeleteNice Moment in time writing AJ
ReplyDeleteNice Moment in time writing AJ
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