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Monday 30 May 2016

Narrative Writing: Maddie Gets Bullied

Maddie Gets Bullied

YAY!! Said Maddie. As Maddie says “It’s my first day of school and I am so excited” Maddie is flying to Australia and is starting at a brand new school. Her new school is called WestChester high.

As Maddie arrives at her new school, She tries to make friends. But that part, didn’t go so well. She tried to make friends by sitting down with a group of girls at lunch but the girls just started being mean to her. They were teasing her, calling her names and mocking her.

As the day was over, Maddie went home laying on her bed peacefully. Maddie’s mum asked her how her day went and Maddie said “It wasn't so great”. Her mum asked why but Maddie Just said it was to complicated for her to tell. After dinner, Maddie went back up to her room just hoping that the next day of school would be much better.

The next day of school Maddie was sitting on a table by herself. Then, the group of mean girls came along. They started being mean to her again but this time, they were mocking her and her culture. Maddie stood up and told them “Stop Bullying me and leave me alone”. The mean girls replied “ What are you going to do about it Maddie?, Are you gonna go home and start crying to your mommy?”

Maddie Just continued to walk away in grief. When Maddie got home, she was just reading a book sadly on the couch. Then, Maddie’s little sister Isabella came. Isabella asked Maddie why she was so sad. Maddie told her why. So to make Maddie feel better, Isabella gave her some candy. Then Isabella started posting things on Maddie’s facebook page saying that people should Stop Bullying and should do something about it. 5 Mins later, It got 1,000 views and likes. It also had 20 comments.

This is all how Maddie’s story began and she finally made friends. These friends were always by her side no matter what. Will Maddie and her friends ever defeat these mean bullies?

By: AJ


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