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Wednesday 27 August 2014

The enormous crocodile





 The Enormous Crocodile

In the biggest,brownest muddiest river in Africa there lived two crocodiles one was big and one was small. The big one liked to eat little juicy children every day for lunch,breakfast and dinner. The small one liked to eat fish,and never likes to eat children. My favourite character is the small crocodile because he doesn't like to eat small children just like me.


I would rate this book a 8 out of 10 because it had lots of similes in it and it was really interesting.













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